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Project Planning: The Script


 This is our script about a mother and daughter verbal abusive relationship. I loved listening to the thoughts and ideas presented by Ronneka about our script she was very creative and created the dialogue and scripting mainly on her own. I was around to give input and assist in minor things and help give her ideas of how to script and looking over it for editor errors and mistakes grammar wise. However, I became ill and was in and out of school as well and dealing will other family issues so it was hard to keep up and stay on top of things however I am back and ready to do more exploring and create an amazing short film. When following up with her on what she thought while she was making the script she stated,"  I had fun coming up with the entire script and getting to visualize my writing. The script is very dramatic and interesting. It also has a good cliffhanger to it that the audience will enjoy. It involves all the dramatic elements needed for the short film." and after reading the script I truly and wholeheartedly agreed. The script looked amazing and I read it like a book. I have a very vivid imagination and everything she wrote I could easily picture in my head, but enough about the script I'll leave it below for viewers to read.

The Script ( By Ronneka Dorah)












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